Who Fic -- Echoes in Erythrae

I'm not exactly pleased with the way this came out. I think my language is all wrong, and some of it feels stilted. So, blah. But here it is, in all of its contrived glory. Why is Doctor Who so very hard to write for?

Title: Echoes in Erythrae
Rating: All Ages
Characters: Ten, the Erythraean Sibyl
Spoilers: None beyond series three in the story itself. The premise is based on a throw-away comment from an already-aired series four episode.
Status: Complete
Notes: Set it the unknown amount of time between The Runaway Bride and Smith and Jones.
Summary: The Doctor met the Sibyl once. Hell of a woman.

 

( He grins suddenly--as though it would make his arrival better--and she thinks that his teeth look too sharp. )